I Admonish Thee

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Hope is the circumference of life
Faith is the circle of the fall
Creation the mighty exponent of
Oxygen and water, blood and time

History notes love is posterior
To fate, that seal of light
That spreads what we were
And mixes it with the cycles
*
That never stop, only recede to start again
Revelation cannot end with
Going blind, we learn to listen
Silence is the jewel of posterity

The future, the brimming Deity in our eyes
Perhaps we ask too large a place
No less to explore the furthest skies
Hope remains the circumference
*
Faith ends all beliefs of smaller bundles
Creation the happening where we exist
Open to all accidents of loss
Yes, oxygen, water, blood, time
These too will be taken away.

Photo Courtesy: http://www.deviantart.com/art/autumn-sun-402106762

9 thoughts on “I Admonish Thee

  1. This is beautiful. I love the picture that goes along with it as well.. My favorite lines are “Revelation cannot end with
    Going blind, we learn to listen
    Silence is the jewel of posterity”

  2. Great topics to write about. It flows so neatly and each line cascades neatly to the one below. So many striking and thought-provoking images. I agree with Gina too as for those lines being my favourite, though the opening thought is a close second.

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